"Breathe"
Harder, deeper, faster
Inside I feel your power
Tonight it is the time
When you will take my life
My pulse is getting faster
As you keep pushing harder
Finding it hard to breathe
With you on top of me
Never thought this day would come
Never thought I'd be the one
To suffer this kind of insanity
Be the victim of this sort of thing
I feel the pressure rising from my chest
How'd I get into this mess
Just as I feel you come
My time here is done
Angela M OBrien
28/7/11
Angela M OBrien (Official Fanpage) Nope... But very interesting guess... Would make a good poem for later :)28 July at 17:36 ·- Tracey Panton It would. It has me intrigued now. My next thought was someone's soul leaving their body28 July at 17:45 ·
- Angela M OBrien (Official Fanpage) Try and picture the event in your head as you read the poem... I did that which is what helped me make it so dang cryptic :)28 July at 18:05 ·
- Tracey Panton It sure is cryptic. Its like sex but also like air escaping the body28 July at 18:17 ·
- Rebekah Dodson Also makes me thing of a woman in an abusive relationship, or a woman who is using a man just to have a baby and trap him.28 July at 18:23 ·
- Angela M OBrien (Official Fanpage) Bek is the closest... But not 100% on the mark...28 July at 18:27 ·
- Rebekah Dodson I guess im not thinking deep enough.. but when I read this poem and close my eyes all I can think about is what a rape survivor and thee trauma they experience ever time they try to pick up the pieces of their life...28 July at 18:28 ·
- Rebekah Dodson Well, maybe not rape but like I said, a woman - a wife maybe - that feels they are trapped and have no other choice but to let their sig. Other pleasure themselves.28 July at 18:30 ·
- Angela M OBrien (Official Fanpage) nope... As I said... The comment of Bek's that i 'liked' is the closest... Think along those lines and read it again... Maybe that will help...28 July at 18:30 ·
Tianna Scott I picture someone being suffocated while being raped... *thinks* Im not that creative! lol28 July at 18:37 · ·
1 person- Rebekah Dodson Omg its about a serial rapist/killer? I like the strangled guess thats good too!28 July at 18:38 · · 1 person
- Rebekah Dodson Its 1am here and I will stay awake until I figure this out... it intrigues me like no other...28 July at 18:43 ·
- Rebekah Dodson Maybe a virgin prostitute or virgin rape victim... as in a child being raped then killed...28 July at 18:45 ·
- Angela M OBrien (Official Fanpage) Tianna got it in one... Its about someone being strangled whilst being raped and just as he comes, she dies... :-)28 July at 18:49 ·
- Angela M OBrien (Official Fanpage) And for Bek... There is three chances to win... The fanpage, my page, and the writers group Pen to Paper... :-) Tianna won this one... There is two more to go... :-) I will contact you to get delivery details shortly Tianna. :-) im on my phone atm :-)28 July at 18:51 ·
- Angela M OBrien (Official Fanpage) so do I Tianna... i dont even know where it came from... I wrote it whilst having a smoke and its crypticness made me want to turn it into a comp :-)28 July at 18:53 ·
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